tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post647877781373410141..comments2023-08-13T01:53:28.234-06:00Comments on Serendipity Mine: UntitledChrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18364296589288079106noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-25283152033661132582007-11-29T18:06:00.000-06:002007-11-29T18:06:00.000-06:00Do you think there's some guy out there in the wor...Do you think there's some guy out there in the world who hears you all planning his fate like that Will Ferrell movie?<BR/>I think that she froze because he was naked, rolling around on the floor with....wait for it....<BR/>wait for it...<BR/><BR/>wait for it...<BR/><BR/><BR/>a whole lot of money because he bought a powerball ticket and won 46 million dollars and they are now wealthy beyone their wildest dreams!Tracy Rambles On And Onhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16928404796336909746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-91610160717732270482007-11-29T08:41:00.000-06:002007-11-29T08:41:00.000-06:00P.C. - You're on :-)Amber - LOL. Due to Battle Pro...P.C. - You're on :-)<BR/><BR/>Amber - LOL. Due to Battle Proceedings the story will unfold over the next 5 weeks. Please check back then ;-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-53382975287076868442007-11-29T08:20:00.000-06:002007-11-29T08:20:00.000-06:00I am all for Bee's suggestion and everyone else's ...I am all for Bee's suggestion and everyone else's complaint: don't leave us hanging!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04135190793124857820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-62600563439256412612007-11-28T22:19:00.000-06:002007-11-28T22:19:00.000-06:00O.k., here I go stay with me here? She opens a doo...O.k., here I go stay with me here? <BR/><BR/>She opens a door and it is a portal, a portal? you say. yes all shimmering, she shuts the door. opens it again and its still there.... tension rises, does she goes through does she stay safe.she goes through. <BR/>(insert romantic time period) I would go with the revolution, they did meet at a fourth of July party!<BR/><BR/>This could be done with enough guy stuff and some good "Lake House" romantics. O.K. I so want to steal your story, I propose a battle!!!<BR/>you me, say 5 pages, then blog world decides. Bring it on!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-33034065300800291772007-11-28T20:41:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:41:00.000-06:00Pokey - Okay. Sorry. Intended Engagement. Geez. De...Pokey - Okay. Sorry. Intended Engagement. Geez. Details..Details ;-) LMAO.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-29379717870139779182007-11-28T20:37:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:37:00.000-06:00they are already engaged???Then what he coughs up ...they are already engaged???<BR/><BR/>Then what he coughs up is a pair of red lacy thongs!!! Bet however those got up there will make her pod at him!Pokey Puppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07328489333212802779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-90735876819917228832007-11-28T20:36:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:36:00.000-06:00Pokey - Now. That's just ridiculous. I know I know...Pokey - Now. That's just ridiculous. I know I know the end...but if I tell you that NOW then you won't read it when I type it up THEN. I want Brett alive but he has to do something horrible so that the engagement if off. That way she can find Matt. DUH!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-59984697274676419302007-11-28T20:33:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:33:00.000-06:00well... he who know the end but doesnt tell so how...well... he who know the end but doesnt tell so how are we supposed to help...<BR/><BR/>She goes in and frantically turns him over and realizes that it was indead NOT his blood but the haloween vials of fake blood for their pary... but he was still not breathing.. or was he barely>???? so she gives him the himlich that she just learned at work at up poops the engagement ring.. he lives, no blood, still engaged!!Pokey Puppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07328489333212802779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-27883102618427885722007-11-28T20:31:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:31:00.000-06:00Pokey - After careful consideration I am not sure ...Pokey - After careful consideration I am not sure that I should actually kill him. It might cause trouble with a later planned plot twist. But I will keep in under consideration. ;-) LMAO.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-56526834246528453962007-11-28T20:27:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:27:00.000-06:00Pokey - MMMM. Now see. That could be good. That co...Pokey - MMMM. Now see. That could be good. That could be very good. Muaaah haa haa. (Have to go and plan the demise of Brett :-p )Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-64400434688946455662007-11-28T20:19:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:19:00.000-06:00Oh fine... cough cough.... she freezes because as ...Oh fine... cough cough.... <BR/><BR/>she freezes because as she looks down the hallway and sees bret.. laying on the ground.. surrounded by blood. red, oozing, sticky, blood. His blood.<BR/><BR/>THere better?Pokey Puppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07328489333212802779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-64189135917629427422007-11-28T20:17:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:17:00.000-06:00Pokey - Okay. Well. The problem is..then she can't...Pokey - Okay. Well. The problem is..then she can't..well..then I have to change the rest of the story and Shelly's fate is already sealed. Minus this one issue of how I get rid of Brett. So your heaving bosom will have to wait until the NEXT story ;-) LMAO.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-46307981235177735902007-11-28T20:15:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:15:00.000-06:00BECAUSEEEEE>.. shes a woman whos been scorned befo...BECAUSEEEEE>.. shes a woman whos been scorned before and was I(naturally) expecting him to be cheating.. so she WAS forlorn.... but in the NEXT section she is elated. Overcome with the jubilance of love. Trows him to the ground in a fit of passion since her heaving bosom is throbbing for him... or somethingPokey Puppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07328489333212802779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-60198294515239488962007-11-28T20:12:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:12:00.000-06:00Pokey - That's not bad. Not bad at all. EXCEPT.......Pokey - That's not bad. Not bad at all. EXCEPT....then why is she all forlorn now?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-16142746685454990942007-11-28T20:10:00.000-06:002007-11-28T20:10:00.000-06:00Son of a bitch. I posted this already.She freezes...Son of a bitch. I posted this already.<BR/><BR/>She freezes because Brett is kneeling on the floor with a ring box in his hand. He had overheared her on the phone the night before and knew what she was planing so he decided to finally be the one to surprise her.<BR/><BR/>I figure someone should have a happy ending and if its not me might as well be Shelly.Pokey Puppyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07328489333212802779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-86362470776850002512007-11-28T19:49:00.000-06:002007-11-28T19:49:00.000-06:00Bee - LMAO. I thought about the spy thing. But the...Bee - LMAO. I thought about the spy thing. But then I figured I'd watched too much <A HREF="http://www.nbc.com/Chuck/" REL="nofollow">Chuck</A>. And then I'd have to take the book in a different direction because...it's not like she'd live to tell about what she saw! <BR/><BR/>So there is my problem. I will have it figured out by next Wednesday. Hopefully. LMAO.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-80768739808616731022007-11-28T19:01:00.000-06:002007-11-28T19:01:00.000-06:00His brother is a spy so they came down to hold him...His brother is a spy so they came down to hold him hostage. She stumbles upon them interrogating him!<BR/><BR/>Yeah don't do the affair thing, if you do make sure she kills him, flees and is never found...<BR/>just sayin'.Beehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12525264720105877075noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-45643875124356058762007-11-28T10:34:00.000-06:002007-11-28T10:34:00.000-06:00Roz - The problem is I've sort of hit a 'writer's ...Roz - The problem is I've sort of hit a 'writer's block.' I don't want the next typical 'Omg, he's having an affair' thing. So I thought maybe you guys could help me with ideas :-) LOL.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5720082365917440106.post-38434119601953106542007-11-28T10:30:00.000-06:002007-11-28T10:30:00.000-06:00What?? PLLLLEEEAAASE don't leave me hanging like t...What?? PLLLLEEEAAASE don't leave me hanging like that!!!Rozhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04071275483015583146noreply@blogger.com